Yveltal

Your work overall is quite remarkable.
You did a good job in shading and blending the colors, the depth is also good.
The highlights were well defined and there is a lot of detail which,at least to me, adds a lot to the first impression.

When you inked it, i think you did, but i could be wrong, making some of the lines broder would have made certain parts pop and would have added definition to the work.
A darker shadow or different shades in the shadow would have been a plus as it adds more depth and makes a greater impact,or would have, with the warm colors used to color the work.